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Matthew Eduard Abuelo
Matthew Abuelo
United States, New York, New York City

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Cleansing The City

Cleansing The City

The city has turned back on itself
while its energy has become clumsy like an old Turk with a knife in his teeth.
This is where the heart becomes extinct
To be raised high into the twisted cathedral like a holy ode
To the truly strange.
Here saints wander with newspapers on their feet and blue flame desires that Burns in their palms.
At the end of each night symphonies of burning
Violins consume us in music of soulless notes and saturates the air.
The ghosts of the tenements and burned out galleries have grown mute
And have been cast into their own trail of tears.
For this new skin to exist the molting process has become violent.
A new metabolism is essential to break down the noise of the great machine.
The snake has died and Moloch has truly cashed in.
The ticket has finally exploded
And the show has gone terribly wrong.
When the burning machinery of the city no longer has a name
And the swine who own the SROs are sent to the killing floor
The beasts who stumble in the parade of the doomed lay obedient and beaten
And the cages of the tombs lay empty
Then the only borders that matter are the borders inside.

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RZelbecq Comment by: RZelbecq - 2007-04-14 13:14
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Wonderful, the cynical half of me thinks that this poem is too complex to attain success with the masses, but artistic greatness is yours, friend.
Grounded Vertigo Comment by: Grounded Vertigo - 2007-04-03 01:49
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As ekofox as said this is a very insightful piece, you have focused in on the detail of what many cities truly are in a way that conjures great images in the mind.
jmfcasey Comment by: jmfcasey - 2007-03-24 06:42
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From one big city to the next, the horror is always an endless source of inspiration. This reminds me a bit of Baudlaire in its subject matter, the urban landscape as an allegory for all the souls that are in its thrall. I particularly like the language swaying between the archaic and the modern, "Moloch has truly cashed in"
TequilaTwilight Comment by: TequilaTwilight - 2006-09-05 04:58
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There was something in this poem that reminded me of Ginsberg's work - thinn k it's the wy you deftly mix metaphorical/spiritual with what is tangible. I like how dark it is, that the images condence to create a strong feeling of renovation - altho the cleansing does not necessarily seem to be a purification, more a necessary holocaust for the souls there. A fascinating poem - i could read it again and again...and probably will!
Comment by: - 2006-06-23 02:17
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Always deeply insightful and provocative work from you, Matthew.
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