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| Wonderful, the cynical half of me thinks that this poem is too complex to attain success with the masses, but artistic greatness is yours, friend. |
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| As ekofox as said this is a very insightful piece, you have focused in on the detail of what many cities truly are in a way that conjures great images in the mind. |
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| From one big city to the next, the horror is always an endless source of inspiration. This reminds me a bit of Baudlaire in its subject matter, the urban landscape as an allegory for all the souls that are in its thrall. I particularly like the language swaying between the archaic and the modern, "Moloch has truly cashed in" |
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| There was something in this poem that reminded me of Ginsberg's work - thinn k it's the wy you deftly mix metaphorical/spiritual with what is tangible. I like how dark it is, that the images condence to create a strong feeling of renovation - altho the cleansing does not necessarily seem to be a purification, more a necessary holocaust for the souls there. A fascinating poem - i could read it again and again...and probably will! |
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Comment by: - 2006-06-23 02:17
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| Always deeply insightful and provocative work from you, Matthew. |
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