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dead love

Finding out about your deceiving ways
The lies you told me everyday
I was nothing to you, but your toy
You played with my emotions for your joy

My sight clouded by my love for you
I couldn't see your wrong intentions, that nothing was true
You miss lead me, lied from the start
Took my love and broke my heart

Trying to forget you proved hard to do
When I was so deeply in love with you
But you lied, never meant what you said
And I can officially say, our love and relationship is dead.

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Nathan Dunsmore Comment by: Nathan Dunsmore - 2008-07-16 15:05
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True and highly relative to many on every level.
trekkiebaggio Comment by: trekkiebaggio - 2006-06-23 07:25
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Yeah, I agree that it is very emotive. The ending is superb as well. Another good one Rachel.
Cursory Comment by: Cursory - 2006-06-22 23:36
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Aw sad and such an emotive poem Rachel. I think you've thrived is this poem. I love in stanza 3, about being blinded by love. Good read.
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