writing community
Sign In Here | Lost Password | FREE Sign Up
E-mail: Password:
Remember login  
The place for writers:
Upload your writing in minutes, receive peer feedback from other writers, poets, authors, then get your work published out there in the real world.       Learn how other writers are doing it.

 
skettio
Kimberly Rodarte
United States, PA

Words: 138
Access: Public
Comments: 4

Forward to a friend
Print Version
E-mail this writer E-mail this user 
View Author profile
Add to Readers  




Sight

Did you ever imagine that you could go blind
and the world could become so distorted
that you wouldn't even recognize yourself in a mirror?

What if the walls suddenly started to bend,
straight highways changed into winding roads
and you were lost somewher in the gray.

Would you thank God for letting you keep what you have
or curse him for taking away what you had?

If you lost your ability to clip your fingernails
or use scissors to cut a straight line,
would you give up and cry?

How would you feel if writing poetry became a difficult task,
not because you lacked the inspiration,
but because it was just too hard to focus?

Could you think about those less fortunate
when you had to close your eyes to type,
so you wouldn't get a headache?

Want to comment on this Poetry?
Sign up to Edit Red and you will be able to comment on Poetry and get access to: Upload your own stories and poems, get readers and their feedback, promote your work...
Sign up






[Back to top]
Comments  
rtiztry Comment by: rtiztry - 2006-06-23 21:53
Add to Readers
      
I really can relate to your wrods..great poem
rtiztry Comment by: rtiztry - 2006-06-23 21:53
Add to Readers
      
I really can relate to your wrods..great poem
rtiztry Comment by: rtiztry - 2006-06-23 21:53
Add to Readers
      
I really can relate to your wrods..great poem
PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2006-06-23 16:58
Add to Readers
      
"How would you feel if writing poetry became a difficult task,"--with writing being such a powerful outlet of emotion in any form, I would hate to think I could not write anymore. I have had writers block and it is horrible.

That particular line stuck out to me because I have felt the very same way.
Well written. I liked the poem in its' entirety, but just connected the most to that one sentence. **
1

Sponsored Ads


By skettio

Featured Writers

Advertising - Terms & Conditions - Short Story Submissions - Contact - Writing Competitions - Writing Links - Book Promotion - Sky-Tribe.com - alanemmins.com
  Member short stories, poems, comments and other contributions are owned by the poster.
Copyright 2003 - 2007 Edit Red I/S