writing community
Sign In Here | Lost Password | FREE Sign Up
E-mail: Password:
Remember login  
The place for writers:
Upload your writing in minutes, receive peer feedback from other writers, poets, authors, then get your work published out there in the real world.       Learn how other writers are doing it.

 
FredaJane
Freda Jane
Australia, northern territory, near Darwin

Words: 214
Access: Public
Comments: 14

Forward to a friend
Print Version
E-mail this writer E-mail this user 
View Author profile
Add to Readers  




Pussy Licking Good

Sitting, bent forward at the waist, her black legs stretched akimbo, toes pointing upwards and outwards. Her stomach lay exposed, dark against a lush creamy cloud of eiderdown. A rare revelation of that soft, curly white fur nestling secretly within the warm black of her lower belly stirred my soul. Sometimes she lets me rest my cheek there, for a moment. She smells faintly of earth.

Then she began washing the insides of her knees again; as if they needed it. Lengthy industrious licks, combing methodically: capturing black hair at its dense furry roots; releasing fine fluffy tips. Occasionally she interrupted her stroking with a tiny nibble on the bone, a heel, then resumed with a satisfying long lick, combing fur with the rough tip of her tongue. She wasn't giggling; it's a serious business washing knees. Instead she was concentrating hard, half hypnotised. I wondered what she could taste.

Finally finished washing, she flopped over onto one side and stretched all four limbs out in front of her, go-faster fur sticking out between the pads on her paws. She looked up from her cosy nest, round hunter's eyes framing a leonine velvet nose. Her thin black lips were smiling. Life would be so much simpler if I was a cat.

Want to comment on this Short Stories?
Sign up to Edit Red and you will be able to comment on Short Stories and get access to: Upload your own stories and poems, get readers and their feedback, promote your work...
Sign up






[Back to top]
Comments  
MMutami Comment by: MMutami - 2007-01-13 06:05
Add to Readers
      
You must be a good painter. You really pay particular attention to detail.All the antics of the small animal very well captured.I liked the title as well. It seems there was the contuation which you left unspoken like this, "Pussy licking Good,Pussy living good!!".
Robert Barlow Comment by: Robert Barlow - 2006-09-06 17:41
Add to Readers
      
Freda, this is an excellent example of creativity from the title all throughout the description. Great hook :) --Robert Barlow
JCR Comment by: JCR - 2006-08-23 06:48
Add to Readers
      
Hehehe, great title!
RoadPoet Comment by: RoadPoet - 2006-08-10 16:54
Add to Readers
      
This is hilarious and great powers of observation in this one. Albeit being the most regal of animals they dont really do much...yeah I want to be a cat as well. Thanks for the humourous read.
CatmanStu Comment by: CatmanStu - 2006-06-28 19:05
Add to Readers
      
We have three cats in this house. They all do less than us, they all sleep more than us and they all eat better than us.
But none of us has the power to look into the eyes of others and make them feel like the most special person on earth.
So I think they've earnt it.
1 2 3 Next

Sponsored Ads


By FredaJane

Featured Writers

Advertising - Terms & Conditions - Short Story Submissions - Contact - Writing Competitions - Writing Links - Book Promotion - Sky-Tribe.com - alanemmins.com
  Member short stories, poems, comments and other contributions are owned by the poster.
Copyright 2003 - 2007 Edit Red I/S