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Taking a stroll
Shaking sand out of my toes
I have the sea
as my view
It's almost as
large as infinity,
reminding of
the love inside you
How can I
feel so whole
when you
..you're so far?
Why cant
this endless sea just carry me
to you
Could it be that
You are meant for me?
Found a shell
on the shore.
I put it up to my ear
to hear your call.
It's like the sound of waves
full of your song
I hear
'Hang on ..Hang on ..'
But why'¦
Why cant
this endless sea just carry me
to you ?
I am telling you
Don't you worry,
anything else
would be so wrong
I will be alright
I got presence
of you're soul
and you're song ..
Your voice
fills my soul
why would I want
for anything more ?
But why
Why cant
this endless sea just carry me
to you ?
Regardless
I still look to the day
That you wake up
with me
to see fulfilled
dreams
and the endless sea
in our eyes ..
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I like the theme here of the sea and the ending with the sea in the eyes. this is better visually than the previous one i read and it's kept simpler too. You've stuck to a theme and developed it while teetering on the edge of 'cheese'. by that i mean too much mush. any more questions and it would have been too many, but you have a good balance, promoting the yearning that you feel.
