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This is such an innocent sounding piece; someone wanting to know they are loved by a parent - the voice you have used to express this piece matches the message. The only line i wasn't sure about was the 'will you kiss me like your small' but the rest of it is beautiful.
This would be something nice a to-be father would like to read in the waiting room if they already aren't scared to death. This was a sweet poem, keep it up.
