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Sorry
I didn't mean to upset you,
Or make you mad,
You're my best friend,
A very good one at that.
I did make assumptions,
of which I'm not proud,
But I told you I'm sorry,
why carry on a fight?
I need you,
I tell you my fears,
You help me through
All thats happened.
Now once again,
I say I'm Sorry,
If you don't want to know
I understand.
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Comment by: PANDORA - 2006-06-28 16:13
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You can only say sorry so many times, and if the apology is not accepted you must move on. This has happened to me (and most everyone I imagine), but is the friend really a friend if they can not forgive?
Good subject matter, great poem. ** |
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| Ah.. I've been in a situation like this before when I was in highschool. This poem is very sweet and well written. I enjoyed reading. I definitly will read more of your work :) |
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Comment by: Min - 2006-06-26 12:50
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thats = that's
Written as you speak...I recognise the extra 'of'. A very pleasant set of verses. |
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Comment by: - 2006-06-26 10:30
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| Ah, apologizing. Such a great thing. We can only say that we are sorry so many times, hoping that they listen. Hoping especially that they understand our reasoning for what we did... This is a nice little poem. =) |
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Comment by: Teri - 2006-06-26 05:17
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of which I'm not proud of, - you don't need the second "of"
Very emotional and outstanding piece, Sarah. I haven't had an argument with anyone recently, but this makes me want to call someone and apologize! :) Keep writing because your gift is one to be enjoyed. |
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