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Warm sheets,
two bodies,
legs entwined
pillows hold,
heavy minds
darkness sets,
faces hidden
mouths sealed,
from bashing rhythm
bed holds lovers
this way, holds
their anger,
dreams it
away
morning rises
day begins,
lovers eyes
wake, fresh
again
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everything seems better in the light of the moring. thanks for a great read. love the shortness the lines and of the piece--saying so much in so little space. nice.
SO many good observations of human behaviour. Agressive tension transmuting into carnal tension. For as love tempers the coals of the disquiet to hush the lovers whilst they embrace...A very sensual and satisfying piece.
I especially like the part that deals with anger being dreamed away and waking up OK. That happens to me all the time. I like your style with only a few words per line.
