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CatmanStu
Stuart Cattell
United Kingdom, Oxfordshire, Banbury

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Then Along Came A Rabbit. (Epilogue)

Watching the giant bear fall, clutching his chest, Carl is reminded of the day the leader came to power. A day that all who knew him did not believe would happen. Yes he was popular, but a leader? Looking back he should have realised it was inevitable. Standing on the podium, addressing his new subjects, spelling out his plans for purifying the forestlands, no-one could quite believe what they were hearing. There were mutterings of disapproval, some believed what he was suggesting was ludicrous, yet he spoke with an assuredness and fluency that washed away doubt and nurtured confidence. He made us believe, that was his strength.

Looking into the bears eyes as he died, Carl saw a look he had come to take for granted, the sight of a friend betrayed, and allows himself a wry smile and one thought.

'Brian always was hard to resist'.

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Leigh Comment by: Leigh - 2006-07-13 00:54
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Only noticed this after reading "The Along Came a Rabbit (Again)" - your reference to Brian the betraying bunny makes a little more sense to me now!

A very poignant, powerful piece. In poor old Dave you create a character who arouses huge sympathy. Nature is cruel!
yican Comment by: yican Online- 2006-07-10 23:00
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Aww, a very sad ending, very great. I agree that this is a very nice closure. If you added this into the first part, the final feeling will be lost. Great job!
PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2006-07-01 19:44
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This is a classic example that the good guy does not always win. It is rare to find such a story, but the good guy can not always win.
The whole piece was well written and flew by as if it were shorter then it really was. Enjoyed this well written piece.
FredaJane Comment by: FredaJane - 2006-06-28 18:45
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nooooooooooooooo!!
nonalienabductee Comment by: nonalienabductee Online- 2006-06-27 13:52
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Ouch. So, having read three "Rabbit" stories, the theme seems to be betrayal (b/c all noir features betrayal, of course). Very intriguing.
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