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when I found you
a mirror formed
your silver coating on my empty glass
now reflected something
whole
Present:
a circular reflection
the two bodies
shift
and meld
a mirror dimension held together
by light
by purpose
Future:
beneath the glare of spinning supernovae
the silver bleeds from the empty glass
the bodies vaporize
for the mind they birthed has
evolved
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Fantastic ending to an excellent poem concerning two souls. Love the set up of past, present, and future. Like the others, I agree it's very surreal, but very good.
This is surreal. Almost like a Van Gogh painting. I could visualise everything that you have described here and that is a great skill that you have shown in this piece.
