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GreenVally
Vally v Kraaij
Netherlands, Noord-Brabant, Eindhoven

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Berry-Covered Dreams

In my berry covered dreams,
I taste
blackberry, mouth-watering
melting,
syrup from blackberry
covers my mouth,
fresh, light fluids
satisfying my needs
butterfly's under my belly button,
I feel you inside of me.

berry so sweet enough to wake me,
flavours hiding like secrets,
with a black skin of silk,
a statement of health,
strong and graceful,
it makes me feel,
like a topless strawberry
warring dark underpants
playing with you,
tasting you,
you are my black-berry dream.

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thisman Comment by: thisman - 2007-05-13 00:44
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very sexy! i started reading this expecting a vision-of-supar-plumbs-dancing-in-my-head-kids-story-poem, but am quite peased to have been wrong. an exceptional piece of writting. thanks for sharing it with all of us.

thom
prolificsantu Comment by: prolificsantu - 2007-03-03 22:22
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erotically written ..." I feel you inside me"....
GreenVally Comment by: GreenVally - 2006-10-02 16:50
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Thank you guys!
Comment by: - 2006-09-15 19:33
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You are my raspberry dream. I like those better. Intoxicating. Love it.

:) Best of LUck to you, Jennifer Pinick
marinesdaughter Comment by: marinesdaughter - 2006-07-06 20:05
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That's a clever way to create an erotic fantasy.
"Butterfly's under my belly button, I feel you inside of me"...why didn't I come up with that? I love it!!! That's awesome!
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