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Tolerated Slavery
People are closing there eyes
Nobody wants to see
What they are doing to me
But Auschwitz is happening again
Moral Fibre tells its normal
Because they need to eat
And Atkins says,
only meat
Irony is striking,
Animal Protein is slowly killing man kind
However, they feel like eating my meat
But they know my revenge will be sweet
They torture me
And damage me for live
But my mind is strong,
Till the end I will go on.
The day man kind finds peace,
They will be free for live
Healthy they will be
And my family will finally be free.
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Comment by: JED3 - 2008-09-30 20:48
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Vally:
Wouldn't it be ironic if one day intelligent alien beings came to Earth from a distant star, only long enough to stock up on food for the rest of their long journey?
...Human flesh, their favorite food!
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Comment by: hx - 2007-11-16 10:29
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Very nicely done. The meaning is quite clear, and well spoken. Just a couple of suggestions: "There" in the first line should be "their". And "man kind" (1st line, last stanza) can be one word: 'mankind.'
Other than that - bravo. Keep it up. |
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