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God is Dirty
If sex is dirty
Babies are dirty
Because they are produced during sex
If babies are dirty
Old people are dirty
Because they are babies that are grown up
If old people are dirty
God is dirty
Because God made the people
If God is dirty
It is time the whole planet takes a shower!
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Comment by: JED3 - 2008-09-30 20:15
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Vally: Yes! And in the shower together, we all shall have great sex!
I liked the poem; nice logical progression. It must be difficult to express yourself in English. English has so many multiple meanings to words and phrases. It is a hard language to master.
Best wishes,
John jed3 |
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| A nice, succinct, sarcastic take on Puritanically tinged morality. |
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Nee, die meening is verkeerd. Dit gaan alles oor die kontext. Mense kan nie sin maak van lewe sonder die Heer. Dus, die gedig se dat as koeie vier bene het, tafels vier bene het, dan is koeie tafels.
Enige Suid Afrikaner sal so vir u se. Godlose Europese. |
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| it says in Genesis that God created man out of dirt...or dust, whichever you prefer. I love the irony of it all, especially with the thought that most of have of ourselves. We're a people that generally likes cleanliness and shun anything that seems "beneath us." But if we're all dirty, then is anything really "beneath us?" Very thought provoking poem, well written. |
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Comment by: Qamar - 2008-07-18 05:07
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| we can argue about many things here. But to say the least , the expression is very good here and the message is conveyed |
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