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GreenVally
Vally v Kraaij
Netherlands, Noord-Brabant, Eindhoven

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Question authority!

Who do you think is always right?
And acts like the perfect guide?
Authority want you to not think
And wants your brain to shrink

They say milk is the perfect food
And that oysters make you in the mood
And that you need your daily meat
But do you really think this is what you need?

There is only one reason for this
That explains why these foods are on there list
If you stop eating these crap
The economy falls into a gap

So, start thinking for yourself
Because deep inside,
you know who is right.
Nuts, Fruit and vegetables are the key
This are the foods that really nourish me

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GreenVally Comment by: GreenVally - 2006-10-02 16:49
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Thanks! :)
mlcarter Comment by: mlcarter - 2006-10-01 17:44
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Nice work...Great mind...
oddfruit Comment by: oddfruit - 2006-08-09 01:44
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Like this Val. However i must confess to being guilty of eating all the crap. It's not easy keeping a body like mine, the constant attention of sugar and alcohol and fat is really hard lol
AmberlanGarrison Comment by: AmberlanGarrison - 2006-07-20 06:40
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I thought this was fun to read.
Comment by: - 2006-06-29 09:51
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I think you've found yourself a niche as a poetist. Keep cultivating your style.

Bobby
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