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craigmack10
Craig Wesley
United States, Oregon, Bend

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Tail gate party

They sat there working on Corona's and a veggie delivery pizza. Friday night. Alexa, Mary and Jen. The college homework is done. The delivery guy was a girl and the I.D.'s were on lock. (Thanks Zach). The club awaits. Nothing can stop them.'He still took her home. I know Greg, he tried some shit.' said Mary, throwing a discarded pizza crust in the box.
'I didn't tell him I thought we were serious, I guess he can give drunk bitches a ride home if he wants.' said Jen.
'You gonna fuck him again?' asked Alexa.
'Yeah, probably...it's not old yet.' said Jen.
'Oh shit, girl!' went Mary and Alexa.
'Well...' said Jen, blushing, looking for her Corona. 'He'll think he could do that shit if you guys did get serious.' said Alexa.
'Yeah, probably, but I don't think I could get serious with him... sometimes I think he doesn't even know what he's doing with himself. but he has his own place and the sex is bomb and I don't think I even know what I want either.' said Jen, wondering what he was doing that night but disregarding it as Greg and his friends couldn't get into the club where they would be later, skimming around, checking out other guys.
'Yeah, that's alright. Look you guys, watch me tonight, I can't drink too much. Don't let those guys from last time around us buying shots and shit, I don't like those guys.' said Mary, draining her Corona.
'Yeah, they think they can put their dicks all over our butt on the dance floor because they know we got I.D.'s.' said Alexa.
'Yeah, they're totally like those two guys on that movie that go out to the clubs and just get dissed and they're all out of control...I forget the name of that movie.' said Jen.
'Yeah, I remember that one, only there's like seven of them, they're like this dick army, I wonder if they take steroids, they're ripped but...something about it seems like too much at one time.' said Mary.
'Like they'll fuckin' die if they don't get any that night...maybe they buttfuck each other if they don't.' said Alexa
'HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!.' they all went. High fives.
'You go girl!'

'We could go to the lounge, but they might not take our cards, it seem easier just to get into the club.' said Alexa, putting out the scented candles she lit earlier. Her apartment.
'Yeah, they know us there, maybe too good. Maybe we should just try for a party somewhere.' said Mary.
'I'll call Greg,' said Jen, pulling out her phone. While Jen dialed Greg's place, Mary pulled out a small bag of the leftover coke they had from last weekend. 'Should we do some now?' she asked.
'Will we have enough to do some at the club later?' said Jen, letting it ring.
'Probably not, it's either now or later.' said Mary.
'Let's wait and maybe somebody will have some more later,' said Jen, folding the phone, and then, 'he's not there.'
'Lets drink some more of these beers, ' said Alexa.
'There's five left.'
'O.K.'

They cut up a new lime and sat there with the long neck bottles letting it go down. They were 19 but may as well have been 30. They sat and talked and drank and wondered what kind of guys would talk to them that night and if what they wearing was alright. They each wondered if what they were doing was the right thing and where they would be after graduation. They weren't sure of much, but they did know they were having a good time and could have an even better time if they damn well pleased. They grew restless and stood up , killed the lights and took the empty bottles into the kitchen. Then they stood outside under the outside light while Alexa locked up. Okay. then it was down the stairs and into Jenny's white Honda. 11:00 p.m. Time for the first club.

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Comment by: - 2006-02-01 10:23
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Great characters. Brings me back - when you're main priority is choosing a club, and the thought of graduation and work is only looming in the background.
craigmack10 Comment by: craigmack10 - 2005-09-04 12:10
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whats up to the gorgoth-widecomb readers group. thanks for checking some stories and your meetings sound fun. do you sell pabst at the meetings? right on and keep it going
LWPRG Comment by: LWPRG - 2005-09-04 01:58
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Really captures that friday night buzz. This is great stuff. Let there be more.
Comment by: - 2005-08-23 02:35
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Again... another really nice slice of life, just hanging out, chewing the fat, doing what girls do... at least it felt real, can't talk from experience obviously.
craigmack10 Comment by: craigmack10 - 2005-08-20 12:44
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the dialogue feedback really stokes me. this might be my favorite part of these. I guess all i wanted to do here was offer their hangout and then they are gone. they are gonna do some shit we all know about and I didn't feel it was necessary to follow them further
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