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Destination Imagination Part 2.5 The Maiden Remembers
Destination Imagination Part 2.5 The Maiden Remembers
I know the reason I did not come to you......... I was told by a high authority that you were slain in battle.......and ordered to stand in service to the Mayan leader...... A woman (here in this town) told me that I was ordered, against my will, to serve the chief Mayan leader - I was a noblewoman who gave herself over to healing others....... But she could never heal her own heart......and she, too, died of a broken heart, missing her warrior and love......
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I understand the meaning and theme behind this write. However, it is working together in a very disjointed nature and is not flowing as organically as it could. Or perhaps i'm merely missing th epoint, I don't know :) ???
