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soloIQ
steve steve
United States

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Kitchen Kitchen

Kitchen Kitchen
we love you
you feed us
Mothers' goo.

Kitchen Kitchen
your so fun
biggest window
full of sun.

Kitchen Kitchen
here's the vote
we need you
on remote.

Kitchen Kitchen
fill that shelf
feed the cat
clean yourself.

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Min Comment by: Min - 2006-06-29 00:55
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I could see children wickedly dancing round chanting this out for their mother to hear. Fun.
PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2006-06-28 15:43
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A kitchen with goo
is not a kitchen but the loo.

We do not eat such things
it is for the dog with fangs.
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