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2runaway
Sarah Barton
United States

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To Run Away

In my sleepy silly town
On the banks of fear and crime
Parents lay their children down
Pop their pills and close their eyes,
I alone still lie awake,
I alone cannot forsake
The rushing in my mind
To run away and strive to find
A chance to take
A change to make,
My daydreams will not let me rest
There must be truth in all the lies
Of valor, love, truth, beauty and worth,
I want to spread my wings and fly
Away to a new world to test
A world where higher principals flow
Through words and feelings, fingers and toes
Where I shall be dazzled my a million lights
That welcome me that arrival night,
So a thousand farewells and one glance back
Soon I will be where no one sleeps
Where thoughts and feelings are more than they sound

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Comment by: - 2006-11-22 13:44
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i've written a couple poems similar to this, nice read!
Hop Hazard Comment by: Hop Hazard - 2006-07-03 23:12
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I liked this poem, it was really well written and so true. Nice work.

ps. the shoes in your pic...they're awesome. I'm in love with them.
wellnessthruplay Comment by: wellnessthruplay - 2006-06-30 08:34
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This is incredible the longing, almost suicidal. I stutter a bit on these lines. Not sure how to fix them "I alone still lie awake
I alone cannot forsake" Perhaps a comma after alone.

Jodi
PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2006-06-29 14:10
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A new world where anything is possible, such a nice dream. To run away--your name fits this poem perfectly. Loved the free verse, I am never able to get it right. Enjoyed very much. **
psgri2003 Comment by: psgri2003 - 2006-06-29 13:50
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This reminded me of John Donne and 'time's winged chariot' with its great pacing, classic feeling rhyme scheme and timeless quality. Great.
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