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Comment by: Cherley - 2006-12-28 16:38
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| What is a pram? I enjoyed the poem. It's sweet-sad. Sweet that the grandfather spent time with his grandson and sad that you feel the onlooker was wishing it were him. Another nice emotional piece. |
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Comment by: fredav - 2006-12-07 04:36
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| this sounded so sad. yes, there were happy moments but there's a tinge of sadness.. I don't know..this was what I felt when I read this. |
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Comment by: - 2006-10-03 13:31
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| this was a beautiful and lovely scene of poetry! I enjoyed. it was so sweet and nice and fun! Enjoyed! |
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| A nice little encapsulation of an afternoon, though of course now I'm dying to know who it is that watches, and why he/she watches, and what makes them so sad. (I am a freak for stories, I'm afraid.) A very good sort of simple. |
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| I think this is so cute. There is emotion and imagery in here. I love it. |
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