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isismarie
Rachael Fields
United States, Missouri

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Sweet Nothings

All the time my mind so pensive in thought
As I think of everything that happened
Then in return what I got
For every sweet memory a tear to my eye
For every blissful moment a time to cry
Can I see you staring back at me?
Can I touch you hand?
Make you my man?
All I have conquered, tall I will stand
All the misery locked up inside
Can I feel your lips pressed to mine?
Once again taste addiction like
Sweet, sweet wine
Fingertips that caress my lips
You body held me close
Beneath the heavenly bliss
Do you miss me?
Can you see my face?
Do you remember us in all of God?s grace?
Understand the love that we once shared
All the times you told me that you cared
All the movies we thought we were in
A new sweet love blossomed begin
Can I lie next to you,
Until the morning through?
Running my fingers through your soft hair
Look into your eyes that sparkle with care
The blue of the morning
In those beautiful eyes
Heavenly angels take me in the sky
I float in the clouds living in a dream
Nothing ever real or what it seems
Touch me and hold me tight
And never let go until the sweet moonlight
I love you with all my heart
It kills me that we are apart
Dancing on the surface
Smile on my face
But late at night, tears of disgrace
Because of how much I miss you
But what can I do?
Longing for your hand to hold
And give me the strength
I want to hear your voice whisper
That love will find a way
Will you ever comfort me
And take away the pain?
Would you still catch me
If I stumbled and fell?
Everything my love grows, more and more
Do you love me at all?
Look into my soul
There?s still an open door
My heart, it looks for you
With every new beat
Broken and battered, ripped and tore
I wanna make sweet, sweet love to you
All nightlong
The smell of candles on the bedside burn
Hold me close with heated passion missed
Every inch of solid flesh is kissed
Beautiful music, magic in the air
Lie next to you until all the energy is gone
Oh, how I miss your wonderful smile
How you brightened each day with love
Shivers up my spine
When you are in the room
The glow of an angel
The squeeze of my hands in yours
That gentle touch
Let me know you loved only me
And I loved you so much
Now all I wonder
Is where have you gone?
Now the days are endless,
And never seem to flow
How do I get past the hurt?
All the pain?
So did you accomplish everything you hoped you would?
I will tell you something
Secretive and lush
All I really want are sweet, sweet dreams
Majestic dreams of our wonderful love
But who am I fooling?
Only myself
Not knowing where to begin
Trying to ease the pain
But there?s only one thing I can do
So I pensively sit here and wish for you
Sweet, sweet nothings of wishes of you.

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skypoetone Comment by: skypoetone Online- 2008-10-19 05:59
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Rach, I feel the length of this poem, given any other genre, would be a chore, rather than a pleasure but you give so much love it made the reading the reader’s pleasure. I would consider having it in stanzas, if only for me to catch my breath… Your poetry always has an abundance of love, without over-sentimentality. I always find an exciting balance of emotions in your works. ~T
desperado Comment by: desperado - 2006-06-29 15:56
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powerfull words excellent poem
im going to read more of your writtings
cant find anything wrong with this one

well done
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