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Acreative1
Anetra Clark
United States, MI, Kalamazoo

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Acid

We want truth, truth in words
Stripped of its sugar coated flesh bare boned raw and
throbbing
Words of passion'no smoke blown up the perpetual
asshole of sentiment
Words: rotted and diseased words that molest yr tongue
and
Opens yr minds eye.
Deep words digging in the moist metaphysical earth,
mining for truth
Bitter red words
Sticky yellow words
Words that rip out the fatty tissues of an argument
Cold words
Words that make yr heart swell and yr genitals bloom
Secret juicy tepid words THE SHIT YOU CANNOT
HIDE FROM
Speak them without fear of retribution
Words on which to cut yr teeth
No filler
Hyperbole
Just nakedness
Exposure
Rotgut absolute

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sporvirus Comment by: sporvirus - 2007-11-30 13:16
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you are certainly an audible artist. Your words are meant to be heard in all their venom and desperation. I read this out loud the second time and could feel myself quaking inside. Reminds me a bit of Patti Smith when she was young.
Love the: "Words that make yr heart swell and yr genitals bloom"
Keep burning and chasing the feeble with your pitchforks of literary chase.

SV
NicFran Comment by: NicFran - 2007-01-29 10:07
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Wish I could have the pleasure of hearing you 'perform' this piece!
jreamwriter Comment by: jreamwriter - 2007-01-11 08:39
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This is wonderful slam poetry! I imagined you on stage silencing the crowd with this one. Can't wait to read more.
Comment by: - 2006-12-22 12:05
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words are the most powerful weapons i've dicovered for myself. that's why i've been able to discard all others . . .
thelastdom Comment by: thelastdom - 2006-11-30 01:13
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you fill it up with sprays and sprays of anger
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