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Acreative1
Anetra Clark
United States, MI, Kalamazoo

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Kill Yr Idols

Pop Star Godheads...
Wet mouthed voids...
Raping yr brain
They all sound the same
With catchy melodies
Bubble gum pop disease
Armies of clones
With microphones
MTV
Top 40
Radio Play
Saturate
Auditory gang bang
Oblivion...

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tcbswan Comment by: tcbswan Online- 2006-06-29 22:50
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great voice--fierce! critique on pop culture. bravo.
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nonalienabductee Comment by: nonalienabductee Online- 2006-06-29 18:45
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Love the sarcastic use of "yr." Very tight and angry, great stuff.
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