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lisalatourette
Lisa LaTourette
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dreams

dreams

by Lisa LaTourette



at night when the words come

lost in the light & the dark

fireflies reckless behaving

& restless lengths of my white fingers

& doubting control

almost releasing

what crouches out of sight,

the part that might sing,

but only a worm worthless curve & coiling,

mouthfuls of metallic dirt;




then jerking awake

every blood brain skin cell

prickling; that sensation

deep in the root of your spine

of being pulled forward

towards a loss, a scent of a memory

that fades with the mornings

abrupt light.

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inviscera Comment by: inviscera - 2006-03-31 04:03
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This is very vivid and quite lovely.
SFNovelwriter Comment by: SFNovelwriter - 2006-03-17 07:12
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Wow this reads like a very bad dream! Is this what you were writing about one of this where you bolt upright in a deep sweat, awaking from a nightmare? That's what I got out of it, heck can almost taste the dirt!!!
Matthew Eduard Abuelo Comment by: Matthew Eduard Abuelo - 2005-08-24 04:19
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"mouthfuls of metallic dirt;" great line
lisalatourette Comment by: lisalatourette - 2005-08-21 07:46
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Charmain--thank you so much--you have made me feel so welcome already--it means even more because i was blown away by your 2 poems i read last night & i can't wait to read more...i'm really looking forward to being part of this site.
Charmain Comment by: Charmain - 2005-08-20 16:07
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thanks for your comments

I really love you work ... you defo flow briliantly and also present excellent imagery .... I wanna read all your poems now .. hopefully get some time later ..... your work will be greatly appreciated on here ...welcome :)
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