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henrydavidlau
Henry David Lau
United Kingdom, Manchester

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Deansgate Safari

Deansgate Safari


The animals are out on parade,
The big cats and the bitches-in-heat
Have their wares on display.

The monkeys are unleashed
Into the tender blue-black night,
Alcohol as an excuse to look for a fight.

The sewer rats weave in and out
Of the rambunctious weekend turmoil,
Spiking multi-coloured cocktails with Rohypnol.

The vultures circle high above the chaos,
The hyenas hide in the outskirts of the darkness
Waiting for their scraps and laughing at the madness.

As the morning comes
And the small hours die away,
The zoo-keepers arrive and sweeps
All the shit and sick away
(Well at least until next Saturday).

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PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2006-06-30 19:37
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This is true anywhere. Try going out on a Saturday night in Miami, there is nothing but rats, vultures, and hyenas.

Very good comparisons, and clear message.**
sailorblue Comment by: sailorblue - 2006-06-30 17:49
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Oh, how very true! Saturday night in any large city in the uk. Still, the highlight of the week for many but only in my youth. Now i sadly need a comfortable chair and good conversation.
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