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Comment by: - 2006-08-13 13:07
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| The characteristics you dream of displaying are the very things most every woman of integrity desires in a man. Perhaps it is a dream, but are they less important than reality? -Leah |
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So did you have Pop Tarts for breakfast today?
... just making a silly reference to your Perfect Moment poem ;-)
Anyway, this is a lovely poem here. As I see it, you are searching for a figure who makes you more into the man, and meanwhile you have poetically defined yourself so exquisitely. Did you know you can be that man already without her? Then you just might find her walking magically into your life.
Cheers to the eagle, protector, teacher, philosopher...
Mwah! |
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| The difference between a dream of going from mouse to man is simply a matter of taking the first step in the right direction. |
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"A dream of a perfect you / A perfect kiss / For an imperfect life".
Not a lot you can say about that.
Perfectly bookshelved with the not-quite-repetition of your first and last stanzas. Yeah, great write. |
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Comment by: - 2006-07-02 15:26
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| Romantic till the end, which is sad. Nothing is ever perfect but what we make of it. |
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