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Comment by: lofty - 2006-07-24 10:54
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| really awesome read well put down. |
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Comment by: - 2006-07-21 08:28
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| Well written particuly the ending. The flow is good to. A good poem. |
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Comment by: - 2006-07-06 08:39
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| very nice write. love how you separated the last bit. really gets your point across. |
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| Very well stated Gavin, but I do not think you have to worry about traveling that path alone. |
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Comment by: Min - 2006-07-02 09:11
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| Well put, Gavin. I liked the way you left 'I' and 'alone' on their own. |
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