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| Very nice! I like the concise use of words. Thank you! |
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| What an interesting concept! I really had to think about this one, and that's always good. |
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| What an interesting concept! I really had to think about this one, and that's always good. |
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Comment by: PANDORA - 2006-07-02 19:49
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| Love the last three lines, very sensual. Not expected from reading the first part, very clever. ** |
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I was surfing a poetry board and came across a thread where they discussed making poetry out of every day objects. This was my contribution.
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