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FredaJane
Freda Jane
Australia, northern territory, near Darwin

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Kookaburra (original prose)

It's common these days being roused from slumber by the various sounds of nature.  Earlier, while the sky still dreamt of stars and pondered the infinity of space, the first bird awakened and with a ritual chirp delivered news of the passing of darkness into light.  Swiftly the message relayed throughout the canopy's cool, green layers and with the brightening air sleepy murmurs of greeting turned to noisy singsong chatter.  I silently acknowledged the monsoon rains had broken and slipped back into comforted sleep. 


Now, hours later, I find myself under the gnarly old mahogany, woken once again by birdsong, this time too cheerful to resist.  Most days a confusing haze of mental details drown out the simple realities of life.  Modern banalities infiltrate and taint any enjoyment of my natural surroundings: radio voices tolling bells of doom; pressing needs and elusive employment; urgent repairs and impending weather. 


But today my mind is clear, fresh as the pastel sky above and bold with the optimism of possibility.  At moments like this a deep concentration overtakes my being until my eyes lose focus, fix instead on some invisible thought, and my body becomes completely calm. 


Immersed midstream between sense and imagination and open to the slightest sound and scent, in this trance-like state I can transcend the anchored mundane into libertine poetic fantasy.


A splash of plump raindrops on leaves above draws my attention skyward.  Squinting into the sunlight I witness a golden shower of dew spray down from the mahogany's upper boughs, still swaying from a kookaburra's spring into flight.  The pale kind sunshine, warmer now, thrills my skin until, eyes rolled ecstatically; I feel angel's wings unfurl and propel me upwards, feather-light, into the realms of breathless winds, swirling through rainbow blues and greens of an unearthly sky around me.


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timeakinga Comment by: timeakinga - 2006-08-19 03:24
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This reveals a great magical place. The whole story flows so natural, as if it was real, and not just a fantasy. Loved it, I could picture myself there. Now heading home :(
clhayden Comment by: clhayden - 2006-07-16 15:33
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Beautiful, lyrical, magical. I envy you your foray into the natural realm. Keep writing and making us all want this for ourselves - enough to do something about it. Bravo!
CatmanStu Comment by: CatmanStu - 2006-07-09 10:16
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God, I need to get away from subburbia; and for a brief minute or two I did. Thank you.
FredaJane Comment by: FredaJane - 2006-07-05 20:26
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Thanks very much! I've incorporated part of this into my short story Oily Red Bird.
Jamilah Comment by: Jamilah - 2006-07-03 21:03
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This is beautifully written. Your description is full and lush. keep

I keep wondering if you'll continue this. You don't have a lot yet, but you've set the scene so nicely.
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