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Someone to touch
lifeless flesh
But at least you can feel
her lifelessness
its there
not symbolic
or some feeling
dead but there
her life the waste
of untouchable days
just flesh
she cannot feel
you touch h erdead flesh
too bad too bad
not one did try
she is not ugly
but none want to make her feel alive
just lifeless
and ordinary
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quite depressing. but the piece cascades well down in a very free flowing manner. this is a good example of free verse in my opinion. it is well written and well developed over all.
