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sinkingsaint
shahbaz khan
United Arab Emirates, dubai, dubai

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castle(bottle of whisky)tribute to jim morrison

Why search the paradise in the sky
Its here, locked in the castle
Castle of glass
Huge, so huge to fill up the emptiness
It sets u free '¦out of the cage'¦.cage of flesh
Look at it & find thy self
Transformation from flames to ice to cries to the endless price
Welcome to the numb'¦.pleasure, treasure, disguise
Beyond perfection,
Universe functions '¦u realize
Senses seek the peak, there r secrets to keep
The castle lies on a cradle of unconsciousness
It takes u, embrace u
Don't open the gate'¦
There is a world outside smiling in the mask of a child...devil sacrificed
Wake up '¦ u r dead

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deathbyacid Comment by: deathbyacid - 2006-11-02 20:33
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yea a bit scary...great
Comment by: - 2006-09-22 18:56
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chilling. Really good.
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