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Injustice'¦the pride of nature
Devastated victims of time
Waiting for another crime
The sin we are told to commit
Still trying to fly with broken wings
Mercy can be found in the books'¦.here is less
Rotten glories crying in the dungeon of time
Time, the irreversible the most lethal weapon
Catch it, twist it, and throw it out of thy universe
Where is the freedom'¦? Free will'¦
Want free fall, escape, and silence to feed wild souls
Make the beast calm'¦.to unleash ssshhhh.
Let's die
One more time'¦
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ive learnt recintly .that i hate when people comment on my spelling and grammer...i say just read the peice as a whole and dont think about the letters...another time
Your ideas are great and I admire your outspokeness. However, you could try working on the rhythm of this piece. That would really improve it. No doubt you have music in your mind for this and if this is according to that then just ignore me! :)
