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Baxter
Baxter Thornberry
United States, CA, Stockton

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The Perfect Personal Ad

Imperfect.. me in a nutshell'¦..

I am sane, silly, feisty and very unconventional in my thinking.

But I want to be spoiled, don't get me wrong.. I want it because I deserve it'¦Not because I need it. I also believe in the full circle way of thinking'¦ send out'¦. get back'¦

And there are no set roles for you and I.
This time I'll supply the tissue, you the tears.


I work, I co-parent, I am the oldest of three so I am always on call'¦Friends and Family mean everything to me'¦ at the end of the day they are your true measure of accomplishment.

I make time for myself and take my smiles wherever I can get or make them. So enjoying music, cooking, theatre, writing, movies, dining, laughter and photography help.

I am feeling unusually what's the word.. down I guess these days.. Maybe because the holidays are approaching.. and I am alone..

Understand, I have been picked before, I was very young'¦ we lasted 3 years and I am not jaded by the experience, I feel more able to handle the reality if ever I should be blessed again.


I am a SBF, 35, half way there, wherever there is, Brown eyes & hair, 5'7'¯, 250lbs.

I have pictures to share, with a sincere, somewhat normal person mind you.. Yours gets mine!

I just realize something.. I-M-P-E-R-F-E-C-T..

I'm Perfect'¦how strange, but I think I knew that all along

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Linza Comment by: Linza - 2006-07-06 10:24
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I love the way that your poetry is so free of verse that it is almost like a melodical diary entry. Again, very personal and searingly honest. I like the way that you've twisted I'M PERFECT and love the halfway there, wherever there is.
PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2006-07-03 16:08
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An honest and open hearted poem. I like how you realize at the end that you are perfect just the way you are. Good read.**
Comment by: - 2006-07-03 13:00
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Speaking of personal, speaking of delightful, speaking of... perfect; I had to read this a couple of times just to come to my senses; and think, fiction, fiction, it is only fiction; this is really a wonderful way to put prose to work at making them live. These words are put together in a way where they must live timelessly aesthetically, and Poe... etically.

Bobby
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