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Sarah Jane
Sarah Dawson
Australia, New South wales

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Never changed

I am not well loved
I am not well kept
I am not well in my mind
I'm not myself most of the time

And I can't close my eyes and fake it
I will everything to be real
But the past consumes me
And suddenly nothing has healed

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Judy Comment by: Judy - 2008-02-24 22:14
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Very emotional and passionate. Thanks for sharing. Good Job.
jahanwisingh Comment by: jahanwisingh - 2008-01-24 12:11
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There is a pain reflected in the poem...coming from the bruises of the past. A sad acceptance that our past always overpowers our endeavor to get ahead with life forgetting all the harsh memories.

nice work :)
Apollo Comment by: Apollo - 2008-01-09 00:55
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Scars are free tattoos... fake nothing and live life however you want... rock 'n roll...
Somnius Comment by: Somnius Online- 2007-11-09 21:25
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You did a great job here. You're good at what you do, and I think you know it. This poem's really easy to relate to, and that's something very well accomplished. Good job..
fiddled Comment by: fiddled - 2007-08-05 10:37
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This is really a great peice of writing! It flows extremely well. Love it.
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