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Sway of the wind, it carries you in your dream
The elated state of being; forsaken but not for you
Land of familiarity yet so distant
Situation always decides the meaning and view.
Further you drift the realization to come
The world you yearn has not gloomed
Color your own daze shell to slumber.
You have left the truth behind; dream is what you are now.
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I understand what you mean, but I think this needs a little work to make it sharper. Is there a Daze shell in reality or is it a description of someone who creates their own false world? I agree with Pandora that's a great statement.
Yeah true. Well what it depicts is how humans dream and yet times one looses the actual reality by creating a dream world of their own in their mind...
"Situation always decides the meaning and view."--I agree with this statement. Sometimes it is not up to us, but up to situation. Well written from start to finish. The last line really ends this in a vivid scheme of meaning.**
