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Say It!
How is it that on your lips
My name becomes
A ritual prayer
An incantation that summons
Dark hordes of brilliant
Lusting demons from my loins?
How does your breath
Inhaled and realeased with
Heaving breasts in time
To my relentless rhythm
Form that one word into
A song that haunts my soul?
And after storms of fury
Are spent in raging glory
Breaking against our
Pressing flesh
You say my name but
I don't remember who I am
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Comment by: tcbswan - 2006-07-22 16:41
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well done--searching, sensual imagery, wonderful end.
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Comment by: Teri - 2006-07-14 19:21
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| Wow, Daniele! Powerful wording and strong, VERY strong imagery. It starts seeming more like a battle of wills than an act of love (that's what I understood, anyway) or sexual release. The end ties it up nicely and with a bit of romance, something I didn't expect. Great job! After reading this, I'm glad I'm not alone tonight. ;) |
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Comment by: - 2006-07-11 13:00
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| Very sensual and fantastic ending. Really love this one. _ Leah |
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| lol I lOVE it !! |
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Comment by: - 2006-07-06 14:27
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| Lovely writing, glad you've moved on from your questioning, doubting, suspicious pieces and come through to the stuff you write so well. It's a very sensual work excellently crafted as always. |
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