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nikhilnaik
Nikhil Naik
India, karnataka, Bangalore

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A Distant Glance

Relation a collage
formed by subtly woven emotions.
The darker tiles represent the need
brighter ones success.
Distant glance and you see sense
oh how important is space.

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Min Comment by: Min - 2006-07-14 02:21
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Another one that makes you think...well done. The descriptions are mixed. I wonder if you could write following just one theme.
nikhilnaik Comment by: nikhilnaik - 2006-07-06 02:08
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human relations have always intrigued me ....thank you so much for your comments!
PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2006-07-06 01:59
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Have you heard that saying, "good from far but far from good?"--
Do not know why but this made me think of that. Excellent ending to describe that at "distant glance" everything makes sense. Great write. **
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