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Linza
Sherrilyn Brighton
United Kingdom, Northamptonshire

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Reflections

My face is blank piece of paper
On which everyone writes but me.
My eyes are reflections
Of other people's expectations.
My life is a book
That everyone has read but me,

And they seem to have read on
A chapter ahead.

I lower my lovely eyes
And cover my pretty face.
I shave off my hair
While pretending not to care.
For all I want
Is to be recognised

As something other
Than a girl.

Just listen to my song and ignore the singer.
Hear the words and forget the speaker.

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Teri Comment by: Teri - 2006-07-16 06:08
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Okay, I've come to the conclusion you and I were separated at our literary birth!!! lol

To be recognized as something else other than what we are on the outside. To obtain respect not for being whatever we seem to appear to be, but for what or who we actually are. I have tears in my eyes right now because I'm reading what I've felt and what you manage to put down so well. AGAIN! You're better than any therapy. Send me your address so I can send you payment. :)

Astounding work, as always. Keep writing more so I can feel better. lol xo
psgri2003 Comment by: psgri2003 - 2006-07-15 13:30
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wow. it was like a held breath in the room after i had finished reading this poem. amazing.
barry edwards Comment by: barry edwards - 2006-07-06 16:59
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mesmerising.
inviscera Comment by: inviscera - 2006-07-06 10:18
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Those last 2 lines are a poem in itself.
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