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winner take all
However unintentional ' shit happens, and I am ok with that.
Provoked? Maybe'¦Deserved never!
Let's get ready to throw down.
I accept your finger pointing ' You take my name-calling'¦
You say you never meant to hurt me - I felt the sting of every word you hurled in my face - and I returned them'¦ I took aim and I fired'¦a barrage of words hollowing out your heart with the impact of a cannon.
You stumble ' across the floor and your words. My roots are strong and deep, I do not waver.
Kick 'me ' draw blood ' draw tears, draw a line, it's my job to cross it.
Shut it off if you think you can - You sit there and pretend you don't hear me, lie if you must but your green eyes they tell the truth.
I stand my ground - I am stubborn and unyielding.
I plant my feet firmly in my opinion. There is a chance that maybe, you are right and I am wrong, but I wont admit it, because I have PRIDE
I have taken my flag and victoriously claimed this battle that I have won ' no it doesn't matter if I fought fair, it matters that I fought and I conquered.
You laugh as you leave 'fire can always destroy the mighty oak' you toss the words and your bag over your shoulder as you retreat.
I win, No - you left.
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Comment by: - 2006-07-29 10:45
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| Powerful--you're out there, girl. I'm glad it ended with the question "who really won". I love the openness and truth in your poems. |
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Comment by: PANDORA - 2006-07-07 10:48
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| Hell yes, the power of a strong women!! Then again, we often hide behind our strength so that our pain does not show. The last line really shows the vunerability, of an otherwise strong ass women. I really loved this.** |
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"draw a line, itā??s my job to cross it" -love this line
This would sound really good out loud. Do you do performance poetry? |
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Comment by: Linza - 2006-07-06 09:27
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Strong, personal, raw... I like it. It may need a little refining but then make sure you don't lose the power.
I really like the last line. Who really won? |
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