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The Other Woman
I am the underwear you rarely wash
but stuff behind the door.
The rest you clean
from day to day,
but I remain, still squashed
between the empty plates and clothes, unseen
for days until you finally decide
to pick all the rubbish from the floor.
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Comment by: Valerie - 2006-10-05 19:44
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| Very nice write here. So much said in only 46 words, and I too, loved the metaphor. Keep writing Sherrilyn! |
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Comment by: Teri - 2006-07-15 14:15
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| Wow ... I'm sitting here open-mouthed at the metaphor and the implications. Great imagery, great imagination, great great great. Thank you for this! And yeah, it is like you want to spit in someone's face! :) |
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| Nice metaphor ...its simple but make a very strong point..will surely look for more of your work.. |
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Comment by: Lander Online- 2006-07-06 10:39
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| Love it! It's kinda dirty, isn't? |
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| Lovely write. Wonderful use of the rhyme scheme. Bookshelved. |
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