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megabyte800
Andrew J.
United States, CA, SF Bay Area

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A Literary-Educational Incident of a Humorous and Upsetting Nature

In my Honors English class in junior year, we were having a class discussion about a few Hemingway short stories. One of the stories was "A Clean, Well-Lighted Place". In it, two waiters at a cafe are discussing an elderly customer who refuses to leave, despite the late hour. The younger waiter talks of how the man has no consideration for those with places to be and things to do. "An old man is a nasty thing," he says. What does the waiter mean by this?, our teacher asks.

A few students chime in, none very enthusiastically or intelligently. A girl a few seats away from me takes her turn:

"Well, old people, don't, like, bathe as much as we do."

Silence.

"Wh...What?" someone asks.

"Well, shower floors are, like, slippery, you know? They can't do it as often as younger people, so sometimes they smell kind of bad. And sometimes," she says, her voice now a whisper, "they have to wear adult diapers."

Stunned, horrified silence.

Our teacher: "I think what Hemingway meant was that a lonely old man has no place in a young, fast-moving world. The statement was symbolic of the despair, decay, and loneliness that old age can bring, of the apathy and resentment that the elderly often receive from the young."

The girl: "Oh."

The End

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timeakinga Comment by: timeakinga - 2006-07-15 12:57
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It's a good story, people often say things others don't agree with. It's funny how the girl interpreted "An old man is a nasty thing", and I also liked the "Oh" at the end. Well, everyone has a different perception upon things :-)
Comment by: - 2006-07-14 05:47
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very humorous and very funny. I think it's a snapshot of a moment in the decay of society.
suleem Comment by: suleem - 2006-07-10 19:19
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Very symbolic piece that makes thinking possible. Why do we hide our elderly inside old age homes instead of celebrating their age and their knowledge??????
Bean Comment by: Bean - 2006-07-10 03:39
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It's certainly an original response. I like the way she carried on digging that hole when people asked her to explain.
Jamilah Comment by: Jamilah - 2006-07-09 22:13
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So did the girl finally get it? I'm not really that surprised. Some of the students I taught have said worse.

Thanks for sharing this. I like the way she proved her own point. BTW, I'm "over the hill" and old seems a lot younger now.
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