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Comment by: jjsmith - 2007-03-14 05:14
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yes michelle
thats all |
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| This is a cool poem. The topic is pretty wide spread, meaning im sure everyone has felt like that to a certain extent at some point |
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Comment by: VB 16 - 2006-10-22 00:44
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| Michelle, it would be a much better world if everyone thought as simply as you've expressed it here. I feel very comfortable with your thought because deep inside I wish for the same. |
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Comment by: mitra - 2006-08-11 05:15
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| Wow.. your honestly and vulnerability in this is inspiring. You write little hopes that dwell in many hearts often untold. |
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This reminded me of that old anthem about "one voice singing in the darkness". The repetition, as already commented, serves this piece well, Michelle. But by constantly pleading for the one person, are we ignoring the people we already have in our lives?
Paul :D |
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