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orgies of the electric poet
fingering ourselves before a
virtual one-way Window
we pet, stroke, perspire, and climax
with each other,
strangers in the eNight
swan-diving into an electrical sea
with our hearts lanced open
arteries erupting in
arcs and streams of
Words...
and we are caught
by a Net of cyber hands
tickling our hungry
and creative skins
from myriad keyboards
across the Qwerty
world, the deepest
pen-etration into the
smoldering Web which
exudes and drips and
squeezes and spoils
the Ink,
drying on the page
crystallized
into kilobytes of
Verse.
We all sing together
the anthem of the ePoet
as we snap another digital
self-pic from arm's length
and Save one another
on a lonely Saturday night.
I gushingly profess my love
to you, kindred souls.
It is all so very...
Electric!
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| This just bleeds cleverness throughout, amazing little write. So much condensed into such a small amount of space. Oh cyber-punk style, I'm off to read more. |
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| This reminds me of two pieces I did called MOTHERBORED. Well written! |
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Comment by: murrman - 2007-11-19 21:22
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Oh my G_d Audrey! This is an amazing, hopeful and brilliant insight into the virtual sea of kindred and not so kindred, souls, "strangers in the eNight, swan-diving into an electrical sea with our hearts lanced open
arteries erupting in arcs and streams of Words and drying on the page crystallized into kilobytes of Verse." I am so glad I stumbled across your work. It's way beyond mundane verbage and takes poetry and the internet to another demension. Thank you so much.
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| Oh yes! Very, very nice. I loved this and I don't love everything. It hung together well, it had good images, a strong voice. It's a wonderful piece of writing. |
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| Amazing. Catchy, smooth and clever. Should I feel guilty that I can relate? xD I love this anyway. |
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