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twinkle-stah
Cally Highfield
United Kingdom

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The Massacre

She pulled a trigger,
snapped a neck,
screamed aloud in the discotheke,
Tore down the kitsch,
screamed to the bitch,
and ran until her heart screamed in her mouth
away, away, run away,
be gone,
be out.

Goodbye pink flamingo
Goodbye pink flamingo girl.

The massacre.
That said goodbye to a thousand
bright
bright
stars.

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Dudethissucks Comment by: Dudethissucks - 2007-03-21 17:43
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Sounds like the character shouldn't double up on e the next time she goes out. Personally, I'm a sucker for a good poem that incorporates the words pink flamingoes. I think the poem may be a bit choppy, but I suppose if your perpetrating some type of massacre that moments would tend to be irratic. or maybe its just the e talking. lol
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