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neil hinchcliffe
United Kingdom, lancs, bolton

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A Confession part 4

A CONFESSION (PART 4)

The question hung in the air like a bad odour. Jane looked awkward and nervous. Dr. Elton blinked.
'Well?' asked Andy.
'Look, Andy'' started Dr Elton.
'I didn't ask you, I asked my wife. Well Jane?'
'Andy, calm down, there's no need''
'Be quiet! I asked Jane. Why did you call him Steve?'
Jane looked at Andy guiltily. She thought about lying and saying that she knew it was his first name just as he did, and that it had just slipped out, but then she remembered that she had always called him Dr. Elton in front of Andy. She gulped hard and decided to be honest.
'I went to college with him.' She said quietly.
'What?'
'I went to college with him. I've known him for years.'
'You went to college with each other? Isn't it against some sort of code for you to counsel someone you know? It's obvious you're going to have loyalties to her.'
'It's not his fault Andy. When we booked he didn't know who I was, he didn't know I was married. We hadn't seen each other for years.'
'You could lose your licence over this couldn't you?'
'Please, Andy, I promise you I've been completely professional.'
'I could sue the arse off you!'
'Andy, it was my fault, I should have realised and cancelled straight away,' Jane said.
'So you were friends then? Nothing else?'
Jane and Dr. Elton looked at each other.
'We went out for a while,' Jane whispered.
'What?'
'In college, we went out for a while. But what does it matter it was nearly 20 years ago.'
'What does it matter? What does it matter? He's had hid dick inside you and you ask what does it matter? What have you been doing in your solo sessions eh? You been having her on your desk Steve? You been trying your best to convince her to leave me? Well guess what pal, you're the one that's fucked now! I'm gonna have your licence! I'm gonna have you for every penny you've got! You're through.'
Andy stood up and leant over the desk.
'Say goodbye to your cushy little life' He brought his fist back and punched Dr. Elton squarely on the cheek.
'Andy! No!' shouted Jane.
'Protecting your boyfriend are you, you bitch?'
'No. Nothing's happened, I swear to you.' As much as I'd have liked it to, she thought to herself. It felt as though he'd caught them having sex, she knew this was more due to guilt on her behalf, but she couldn't help feeling she'd betrayed him.
'It was years ago, before I even met you. I can't change my past Andy, I'm sorry.'
Andy fell quiet for a while.
'Look, I think I should leave you two alone for a while.' Said Dr. Elton. 'I have to call some clients anyway, so I'll go next door and let you thrash things out for a while. Just knock on the door when you're finished.' He stood up and walked through the door to the adjoining office, closing it behind him.
Andy and Jane looked at each other for a while.
'Well?' he asked.
'I was right sweetheart. I'm absolutely soaking.' She stood up and walked over to him.
'I must admit I was pissed off when you told me you used to go out with him and that you still fancied him, but this was a great idea. Much better than your first plan for me to let you fuck him. At least this way we can walk out and maybe even make some money.'
Jane hadn't been listening to him. She could feel the wet gusset of her knickers rubbing against her labia. There was only one thing she wanted, and she could tell from his trousers that their little charade had got Andy worked up too. She knelt down in front of him and undid his zip, reaching inside to free him from his boxers. He sprung out, bigger than she'd seen him for a long time.
'I see it worked for you too.' She said, and slowly slid her lips down the length of his shaft. He let out a small groan as she took him all, then slowly drew back and licked the tip of his glistening manhood. As she stood up she slipped her knickers off, and sat on Dr. Eltons desk.
'I want you now,' she gasped. 'Fuck me.'
He stood up and walked over to her. He slid his hands over her knees and spread her legs. He allowed his index finger to slowly trace the outline of her lips before gently sliding in into her.
'Oh god,' she moaned. 'Not your finger. I want you in me now. We haven't got long.
He removed his finger, and with one long solid movement slid himself all the way inside her. Jane couldn't help letting out a gasp. She couldn't believe how big he was. This had obviously worked wonders on him. As he withdrew and then slammed into her again, she let out a loud moan. Shit she had to be quiet, but she couldn't help it. She just wanted to scream the place down. Andy realised this, pushed her back onto the desk, and covered her mouth with his hand. This got Jane even more excited. Andy was never this dominant, and she loved it.
His thrusts started getting more and more frantic and Jane wanted to scream even more. She could feel it building inside her, and knew she was going to come any second. Oh God! She hadn't come with Andy for years, but the animalistic way in which he was pounding her was just too much. She felt the release and had to bite onto his hand to stop herself screaming at the top of her lungs. She felt him swell inside her as he came, filling her as if he hadn't had sex for years.
Their breathing slowed down, but she still had her legs wrapped round him, and didn't want to let go.
They kissed long and hard.
'Jesus Andy, that was the best in ages.'
'I know. I don't know what came over me.'
'Well don't you dare think of apologising.' She smiled and kissed him again. 'Come on we'd better get ourselves sorted.'
They straightened their clothes and Jane knocked on the door. Dr. Elton walked back through.
'Is everything ok now?' he asked.
'It's better thanks,' said Jane, 'but I think we're going to have to cancel all future sessions. I'm sorry.'
'No, I understand.'
'You can still expect to hear from my solicitor, you son of a bitch.' Andy said, and walked out.
'I'll be there in a minute, love,' Jane said.
'Ok. I'll be in the car.'
After Andy had left Jane looked at Dr. Elton.
'It worked a treat Steve, sorry about the punch.'
'It's ok, it wasn't too hard.'
'Don't worry about what Andy said, I'll make sure he doesn't take any action against you.'
'Thanks Jane. So I'll see you tomorrow night then?'
'Definitely. Just send me a text with which hotel you're in. I've got 20 years of lust to take out on you, baby.'

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lofty Comment by: lofty - 2006-07-24 10:37
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keep it coming...sorry you know what i mean,
a great chapter 4 hope not a great ending.
JCR Comment by: JCR - 2006-07-21 06:41
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You dirty, dirty man! I loved it! You took your story by the throat and throttled it! I liked the twist at the end and I assume that Jane will use Dr.Elton and Andy, then feck off with loads of money into the arms of a biker?!!
jagainst Comment by: jagainst - 2006-07-13 12:51
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Damn, Neil, you twisted man. For a bit you had me wanting to start attending marriage counseling, and I'm not even married yet...ha!

Man, this shit is the perfect of mix of literary ingredients: deception, lust, comic relief...I love it! In my opinion you;ve written the previous three installments perfectly to work up to this one. Best yet my friend and I can't wait until part 5.
bonnieclarke Comment by: bonnieclarke - 2006-07-13 12:39
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HAHAHA! Neil, you dirty minded rogue. This was awesome! Love it love it love it! Jane's little game on the men is just perfect, and your description of the sex scene was realistic, and jam-packed with intensity. Wow! About another part, it can go either way. This was a great ending, and could be a great beginning to one of those guys being screwed over, or Jane getting what she deserves! Very well done.
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