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Renatta
ren simon
United States, oklahoma, blanchard

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What I need.

The night is silent
The sky is clear
The thunder is near
A silent wall is now me.

I have no money
I have no food
But all I need
Is in my house.

My family loves me
And I love them
In tough times
We all pull through.

My mom is there for me
Like the sun in the summer.
My dad puts me straight
Like a line of trust.

My brothers drive me places
Like older brothers do.
And my sister is...
Just a sister to me.

And my mimi and papa
Are there for me
And that is all
I really,really need.

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xxsasha1xx Comment by: xxsasha1xx - 2007-03-12 12:33
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Aw... this is so sweet, I hope you shared this with them as well. Nice write.
xxsasha1xx Comment by: xxsasha1xx - 2007-03-12 12:33
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Aw... this is so sweet, I hope you shared this with them as well. Nice write.
xxsasha1xx Comment by: xxsasha1xx - 2007-03-12 12:33
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Aw... this is so sweet, I hope you shared this with them as well. Nice write.
simowierdo Comment by: simowierdo - 2006-07-25 17:51
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i love how you described your love for your entire family. well, written. thanks for the read!
lufkinmom Comment by: lufkinmom - 2006-07-24 15:50
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Bam Bam said that she has a suggestion, she would like for you to write a poem about me. She said keep in mind that we have all made some mistakes in life, but what is the principal you have learned from the mistakes I have made.
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