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The Delicate Balance Of Power Between Men And Women
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The Delicate Balance Of Power Between Men And Women
She told me not to do it
So I didn't!
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Ok, we could take this one to the Jungian psychologist and mull over it in a Master's thesis. For starters, speaking of balance, the title has almost as many words as the poem itself. And why is it about "not doing" instead of "doing"?
He he, great job.
Definitely written in the voice of a man.
