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Idainne
Garry Alan Nixon
United Kingdom, Manchester

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Deep Frozen Soul

This cold, it clings to my skin
Fills my senses and rushes through my brain

My physical senses don't feel it, they became numb to the pain long ago
But elsewhere it still burns, the chill inflicts searing pain

A cold shoulder never intended to inflict this
Intentions never do as they say, never
Hence this chill, this ache, this pain

I wrap myself up, sit inches from a fire
Burn my skin, black and cracked from a naked flame on a naked body
Yet I grow colder still and burn a little longer

I need a different fire, I need to be burnt by something else'¦

someone else.

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DamitaPerez Comment by: DamitaPerez - 2008-04-24 18:27
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This is so pretty. It actually makes me want to draw the picture that appeared in my head. Great work sweetheart!
staceyrlouiso Comment by: staceyrlouiso - 2006-12-31 16:30
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Hi...conjures up nice imagery. It's descriptively precise. Very nice!
staceyrlouiso Comment by: staceyrlouiso - 2006-12-31 16:30
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Hi...conjures up nice imagery. It's descriptively precise. Very nice!
staceyrlouiso Comment by: staceyrlouiso - 2006-12-31 16:29
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Hi...conjures up nice imagery. It's descriptively precise. Very nice!
Comment by: - 2006-10-06 14:07
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I like the wole thought and twist of this. the fire and ice type thing! interesting!

good job!
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