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sweyn
Sweyn Plowright
Australia, NSW, Sydney

My Bookshop
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Concentric Rings

Around the year's ring
The mindless toil
Turning the seasons
Spurning disappointment's reasons
Annual

Monthly scribe
Red blotted diaries
Recorded for posterity
Sordid empty memories
Annal

Weekly trudge
The wage slaves
The year's toroidal journey
Endless ring of learning
Annular

Dawn's daily ritual
Waste elimination
Seat of life's interpretation
A ringing comment on our situation
Anal

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Comment by: - 2006-07-23 06:17
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and constiveness makes it worse.
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