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marta
Marta Weeks
United States, California, Elk Grove

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A New World

A new world will unfold
not from the heart of religious prophecy,
but from the mind of technology.
An event so holy will be seen as evil.
All Mighty,
will tabernacle harlots interpret Your wisdom,
separate and good
from the cosmetic and customary?

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carriedale Comment by: carriedale - 2007-07-15 04:46
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wow...this was a wonderful read. I have to agree that the last 4 lines are really good. Everyone else has already suggested what I would have, so...Thanks for sharing.
marta Comment by: marta - 2007-07-14 14:27
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Absolutely correct. I will put a ? at the end.
Cherley Comment by: Cherley - 2007-07-12 14:27
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I hate technology. LOL. We got new cell phones and it took us 3 days to program them. But, it goes on and I guess we just have to try to keep up with it.
Promking007 Comment by: Promking007 - 2007-07-12 09:39
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Some wise man prophesied that "The revolution would not be televised." Perhaps its already occurred and we are seein' it via Hubble telescope.
marta Comment by: marta - 2006-07-20 09:32
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Thank you noneedtofocus, I will consider your suggestion.
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