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Lana Burke
United Kingdom, Essex, Southend

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Anti-Depressants

when it all tastes
like dust
life is nothing
but a dull headache
you can't be rid of

when it all blends
into grey
life is nothing
but a thick fog
that will not lift

when it all feels
like time
is not standing
still but
going backwards

it all just seems so bland

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Comment by: - 2007-02-05 08:24
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love the last line.
SombraMariposa Comment by: SombraMariposa - 2006-08-18 16:49
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I feel this poem. It's me(part-time anyway, me being bi-polar and all).
Bipolaris Comment by: Bipolaris - 2006-08-10 12:11
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great poem on a huge subject. This is why I started writing. This is probably why most people start writing. We're all locked in a room typing away and expressing ourselves to ourselves because no one will listen. Anyway, i ran across your poems while exploring writers in other countries besides mine. I like it. You should read my poem called "Medicated." similar subject
denisedee Comment by: denisedee - 2006-08-10 03:10
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I can feel this one. I have been there. I hear this in my head as a song. It's kind of swirling.
Lander Comment by: Lander Online- 2006-08-05 04:31
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Emptyness is a silence only the depressed can hear. I liked the relaxed way this came across.
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